Thursday, March 14, 2019
Elevator Pitch 2
The feedback I received on my last elevator pitch was all positive; mostly compliments on what they thought stood out the most. They liked the business idea and that I compared it to Uber, therefore making it something that people can recognize and envision. I kept most of the content that I had in my last elevator pitch because I thought it worked well, but took out the parts that mentioned a consumer prototype that had children. After my first elevator pitch, my consumer prototype evolved into the newly working adult without children who is trying to find their work-life balance.
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Hey Hope,
ReplyDeleteAfter reviewing both of your elevator pitches I can see that you have improved a lot with becoming way more clear of what your product and your idea was. Your first pitch was actually really good too so I like that you stuck with most of the stuff you did in the first video. Great Work!
Hi Hope!
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch is convincing, concise, and simple. You clearly thought about what you had to say and were prepared. Nothing that wouldn't be hard to understand and have to think about. You made sure you weren't talking quickly and that your words were simple enough and got the message across clearly. Your hand gestures were very appropriate and conveyed your message. Great job!
Hi Hope, your pitch was very well done, your product was given smoothly and clear. Your intro reminded me of professional ads with people talking about what they're selling on TV. You can easily relate to who its aimed towards.
ReplyDeleteHi Hope,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very well-done elevator pitch! Great use of hand motions, especially when you're counting off the food options with your fingers. This small gesture can make a big impact in subconscious messaging as it helps the audience understand the variety of choices. Good use of vocal tone as well, this helps you sound friendly and confident that you have faith in what you're selling.