The feedback I received on my second elevator pitch was similar to the feedback I received on the first. My reviewers gave me all positive feedback again, saying that my pitch was very professional with appropriate hand gestures and speed. Because of this positive feedback, I felt even more confident in my pitch and didn’t feel the need to change anything. However, it can always be improved so I just tried to memorize it even more and I dressed business professional to make it seem real. I think I felt more comfortable in front of the camera than I did in my previous pitches, emphasized the right words, and added in more hand gestures.
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Assignment 30A - Final Reflection
Assignment 30A – Final Reflection Looking back at all that I’ve done and learned throughout this class, the most formati...
Hey Hope, I can see why you got exclusively positive feedback on your last pitches, this pitch is great! Awesome job with the delivery as well as getting out the most important information in the short amount of time. Hand gestures and speed were great too, you pitched it like a professional businesswoman. I honestly can't think of anything to critique, which is great! Oh, and very cool product!
ReplyDeleteHey Hope, great job on your elevator pitch. I think that you did a very solid job of getting your point across and selling your product to the audience. I think that you could maybe improve on hand motions and eye contact but besides that it was a very good pitch and it is clear you have put a lot of work into it. Great Job.
ReplyDeleteHey Hope, your pitch was solid, great way to further improve your already great pitch from before. Adding the business dress just made it even more professional and real. Your product was conveyed just right.
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